love this one too :)

This was a relaxing and enjoyable read. :)

Love the small Blue x Green part 3

jakjshdkjashd That Gold... a total pervertXD

Love Gold's part in this! Very funny to say in the least.
I've never heard of BluexGold before, so I'm kind of shocked.
(Stupid Me, by now I should have figured out they ship EVERYONE together)

Anyway, keep up with the fics!

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What was Green doing their anyways. *gaps* he wasn't spying on Blue was he! Ha so unlike him is he was :P. I liked the last part. So sweet, yet humorous! It was fun reading this story. I have a thing for Blue and Gold being togther but *shakes head* oldrival and manga quest shippings are much more my cup of tea :) Whats buttshipping anyways? Blue and Gold? Hehe funny name though LoL.

X3 ending is always the thing you look forward to! Cause yours is always super funny! Anyways...THANK YOU FOR THE STORY! :3

lol. I like how Gold goes on about Blue and then changes his mind at the sight of girls in bikinis. XD

Anyways, this was really funny and I always love a little Oldrivalshipping. And Buttshipping is a very interesting crack pairing and Blue is the prettiest girl. Ah, you speak words of truth my friend. lmao. Well, loved it. ;D

hahah, nicely written! ;D

Lol, this is hilarious! Gold is so cute! (Not that way, I'm not gay (Hey, that rhymes...))

Haha, I liked it; It was cute. And bit different from your usual stuff. I loved seeing Gold in this. xD Keep up the great work.

AHA! Enter, me the reviewer! D Okay, so, before I go all grammatical on you. *Sigh* I wish you could have put in a bit of MangaQuest. I don't mind PreciousMetal, and you know I love OldRival, but MangaQuest IS my OTP. Ah well. I'll be happy that you put Gold in this fic XD and if there's less MangaQuest, more for me to write! *Shot* Okay, the usual...

'I’m planning on continue lying here in peace' 'Continue' should be 'continuing'.

'and you’d better be on leaving this place this instant.' 'Better be on leaving'? Maybe 'better be leaving'.

'"You didn’t deny."' Most likely just me, but what was she supposed to be denying?

'“So now’s that out of the way"' 'now's' is not the correct term here. Try 'that's'.

'he had visions of seas of time ' Not sure what you're trying to say here. Did he have a vision of a long period of time?

“Sorry, Gold. Not even there.” Um, hello, Blue, Gold DOES have looks. What are you saying? XD

'tomorrow there was another day, and another day meant other chances. And other girls.' LIKE CRYS, PERHAPS? 8D *Shot by MangaQuest haters*

Alright, that's all for now. Good job overall-I'd gotten used to your writing OldRival stories, so it's a nice change. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

...I LOVE THIS.

Personally I like the concept of Gold/Blue flirting (not with each other lol) Their interactions are pretty easy to go by in a way; Gold hits on Blue, Blue flat out rejects him and banters him a bit.

(Though Blue might consider Silver as an advocate, however I doubt Silver would want to get in between the two.)

As Oldrivalshipping is LOVE, Buttshipping is too funny to pass up :)

Very well done!

It's really funny and that's why I really like this story. Especially I like the ending. :D

OH, I LOVED IT SO MUCH.

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