She did die but Pein he bought everyone back to life but use the sage of six paths Jitsu

I think this poem is great. I know what Naruto is going through. He will show no mercy at all to his enemies. He will fight with all his might. And I know that Hinata has a secret longtime crush on Naruto ever since their first Academy days.

Omg!That was such a great poem!

Im normally not a fan of poems but this one really got me, I could feel chills down my spine. Great stuff.

It was pretty good. I liked it!

Awesome work here, sniff, sniff. don't cry hinata, you know Naruto wouldn't want you to cry, Sniffle.

oh this was so beautiful and touching!

I never knew boys could do poetry so well but you proved me wrong(side note :you are a boy right? pardon me if im wrong!)

also yes it was heart aching!their too my favorite couple!the way you describe emotions is just so wonderful!

continue to write!and inspire!

signing off...

:)

cute Amy

WAH! Sniff Sniff So Sad So touching

This poem is the best

I like to share it with the rest

but if only I could

I didn't say I would

I tell you my reason why

that I won't share it if I tried

the answer to this question is

I'M FREAKING LAZY!

HAHA! Just kidding... Lol I made that poem without even thinking... Anyways great poem. But I think the last sentence is a bit off... I think you should change "Hinata" into "she"... Anyways it is just an suggestion so it is up to you... And no this is not a silent threat... Anyways keep up the good work!

thos last 2 kinda dint rhyem

As an avid naruhina fan, I must say that (dramatic pause) I loved this poem. I'm also an amateur poet so I have an idea of what to look for and you did a very good job on multiple levels.

Actually, it was this chapter that got me into the manga. The chapter seemed so emotional. I was hoping she wasn't dead, but I gotta tell ya, I thought she was a goner too. And when I caught up, I saw Kakashi was killed as well, and I was just shocked...but I assumed that Kishimoto couldn't kill them all, so I had my fingers crossed that Hinata wasn't dead.

I can fully understand how you felt, and the poem was fantastic :) Love Hinata!

Oh that was so beautiful and deep I love it! You have such talent and for it i bow to you *bow*

...I'm a sucker for these things v-v;

SO cute! I really really liked the poem, and you're really good at this :-D

SPOILER ._.

SPOILER ._.

SPOILER ._.

She's not dead though. Sakura saved her :'D

SPOILERS OVER OTL.

I'm pretty sure you know that already, but I had to say something otherwise I'll be doubting myself D:

And tomorrow is a new chapter! I just hope she and Naruto get their moment soon ;_;

While I will say this been much more emotional read right after 437, this is a very deep and heartfelt Poem that embodies Hinata well as well as the tragedy of her falling at Peins heartless hands.