What is this ending?! I loved the story up until the last few paragraphs. Does she choose Edward or Jake? Seriously?!

Love the story keep It going

Don't care for how long this is dragging out for she would have told him chapters ago. Skipped to the end date to find out. Nope.

Are you ever going to update anytime soon? Please do.

Please write more, I love this story.

Is this story ever gonna be updated?

So what now that she feels that he could walk out too it scares her. Typical.

Oh no who came home?

So Teddy boy still lives in ignorance?

How does she knw she doesnt love him?

This girl makes me sad.

This girl is weak, un sure, and more importantly desperately trying to find something more in her life that she didn't even knw she lacked or ever wanted in her ilfe. And the worst part is she didn't even knw it. Which is why she goes back to Jacob every time. He gives her that thrill, excitement, sexual awakening if you will that she never thought she wanted or needed. And Jacob's the one that gave it to her and its scaring her shitless now and doesnt know what to do about it.

Fuck not sure where she has her head but she's so fucked right now.

Oh son of a bitch! He has her ring?
If this girl couldnt even ask Jacob did we have sex, then she shouldnt be having it. She sounds like too much of a prude. There's something I read on FB sometime back. There's always a guy that turns a girl into a sexual deviant. Well she found hers.

This is good I like this Jacob and Bella approach but in my honest opinion Bella end up with Jacob probably cuz I ship Bella and Jacob but you know it's just how I feel and it's awesome what you can do with them Bella should definitely tell at Edward soon. The dream has to mean something for Bella. You have some great chapters here.
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