Reviews for To raise a youkai |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i woupd love tp see this continued i am highly curious to see how things will go |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue |
![]() ![]() I'm very curious to see where this story will go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really great story please update soon |
![]() ![]() Please hurry up with the next chapter please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving it! Please you have to update soon! |
![]() ![]() I found the first chapter intriguing but from the fourth chapter the story turned meh pretty quick for me. I didn't like your Rin who was sad and whining whether Sesshomaru loves her or is angry at her. She's a cute girl in the series who was able to see beyond his actions and know he cared underneath and regardless of that she loved him. You have a right to write Rin in any way you wish, I just found her a bit annoying rather than cute here. I also wasn't fond of your changing Rin to blood bond to Sesshomaru, and Kagome looking to bond Shippo to herself too. They can still love and care perfectly fine without being of blood. Sorry but didn't like where the story was going in the last two chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wish there was more to this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. Do you have any idea on when you will post a new chapter or if your working on one? If so could you please inform me? : D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is quite the story you have. I have to say that i have thoroughly enjoyed it so far. I do wonder what will happen to Inuyasha, and what happened to Sango and Miroku. Oh the questions! Well done on this i cannot wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story it is very good and I wish to see it finished if possible thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd love to read more soon to this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love where this is going so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz update soon! |