I loved those poems too. Yellow I feel sorry for you and Gold you are so FREAKING stupid! At first I thought the poems were for Red until I saw it

I liked :)

awww i wish you continued! it was really good!

Hmm I don't really know what o say about this, I like the idea, but, the execution of it felt rather ridged, it felt more like an excuse to write poems instead.

Besides that, Yellow always seemed like the kind of person who would rather be outdoors having fun then inside lamenting on her own misfortune.

And same with Gold, he’s an outgoing fun type of person, more likely to push himself as far as he can, and try burn the depression away. Not sit around and use other people misfortune to cheer him up.

As it was, it was an enjoyable fic to read through once, but it doesn’t really hold any reread value.

Well, very well done. The story was entertaining, fun to read, user friendly, and aside from Gold's "king of the school and popularity" thing, you introduced exciting and interesting twists that I haven't seen in a fic or even professional yet.

Aside from RedxCrystal, I write all the ships that were portrayed here and I have a lot of files in my computer and story ideas for them. But this is something I couldn't have thought up and honestly it inspired me. I can't wait to get writing now.

I liked the plot overall, I love the love-octagon you introduced, and Yellow's characterization in this fic didn't neccessarily fit Yellow's character but didn't NOT fit her character either. That's what made this SO good. I bet Yellow would look cute with glasses.

You're able to make us feel strongly for the characters and keep us the whole way through the story. My only complaint is that Gold seemed a little recycled as a character in this story. The whole thing with popularity(which is absent in school's today), chocolates and flowers. He's just corny I guess. But the irony of him supporting Yellow while unintentionally bashing himself and his comment "That guy deserves it" more than makes up for it simply for the fact that it's phenomonal and creative.

While not completely perfect, it can be described as such. And maybe it's just because you ended the story on a hug instead of a kiss but, as an AmberShipper, it leaves you content and satisfied but still wanting more. I feel a sense of fimiliarity with this fic in comparison to my current and future ideas but at the same time I feel like no one else on the planet could produce this story but you. 11/10, and that ain't no typo.

I'm wondering what does Iinchou mean?