Reviews for Whispers in the Dark
Guest chapter 21 . 7/26/2017
I know that it's been a while, but damn, 21 chapters and nothing happened. Except Bulma passing out all the time, what a waste of time.
Esso1979 chapter 21 . 7/27/2017
Can I get an update please?
Devilrockz95 chapter 21 . 1/29/2016
Please update I love this story don't leave it unfinished
Devilrockz95 chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
Did you recreate the story somewhere else I want to finish it, give me a sign! The story can't go unfinished
Jessica chapter 21 . 8/6/2015
Continue the story please, I've been reading it since the beginning. I like how the characters aren't OC, you wrote them just like they act in the TV show and manga. Keep it up!
LadyBardock chapter 21 . 11/23/2014
Maybe one day you will come back to this story and continue? ;)
C4tloverr chapter 21 . 2/6/2014
COME BAAAAACCCKKKK!
Marorin5 chapter 21 . 12/13/2013
Love this story! It's awesome! I really wanna see what happens next with Bulma and Vegeta. After all Vegeta is punishing Bulma, and all her friends wants him away from her. I'd also love to see what will happen with Kakarot and Chi-Chi. They're my favorite couple after all :3! 17 wants Chi-Chi as well after all, and I don't think he'll let go that easily. Yamcha's doing a huge mistake by cheating on Bulma. I don't hate Yamcha at all - in fact, I like him. But, here he is screwing it up. He cares about Bulma yet he cheats on her. But then again, she hadn't been that faithful either, considering Vegeta. Gotta love the love triangles in this story! Vegeta/Bulma/Yamcha and Kakarot/Chi-Chi/17. Hee hee! I just can't wait for the Saiyans to break free! I'd love to see Z-Fighters v/s Saiyans, with Bulma's and Chi-Chi's mixed feelings because the Z-Fighters are their friends, yet they love two Saiyans. Especially Bulma. Hell, she loves the Saiyan Prince and it's thanks to her the Saiyans will be able to break free! I'm wondering if Tarble and Raditz will apear in this story. It'd be fun seeing Tarble meeting the human his brother wants for a mate and same goes for Raditz. By the way, about how the place Kakarot and Chi-Chi meet in the dreams is spelled 'Mount Paozu' :)
Please, please, pleaaase update! You haven't updated since 2011! This story is way too awesome! I love it! :3
narukofoxgirl chapter 21 . 9/28/2013
I love this story please update soon! please!
Guest chapter 21 . 3/17/2013
When are u going to update
0Sweetpea0 chapter 21 . 3/12/2013
hey yeah so I really love this story so you should update cause its been like years... just saying...
so please please please update soon :)
Kasha Baku chapter 21 . 3/9/2013
i love this story its my absoulute favorite, please continue to write more
Okinawa Girl chapter 21 . 12/4/2012
Please update this story it's really good!
Kyo1Catbattle chapter 21 . 11/18/2012
Hey I gotta tell ya this. Your AWESOME! I love ur work its just u gotta write more please! And I think u should have Chi Chi tell everyone about Bulmas feelings and that they should try there best to get Bulma out of the house and stuff so she won't remember Vegeta yet it don't work and once they realize that they bring everyone to the look out with a machine that can take u into someone's mind and take anything out of there and bring it into the real world and it becomes a real object or 'person' and then they could try and take down Vegeta but it doesn't work. And I leave you with that to try and figure out the rest. Email me if you want its : 3 Kyo1Catbattle :3 meow. ;p bye
blueeyeswhit3 chapter 12 . 10/6/2012
I really enjoyed reading this chapter .
Your story is so amazing!
So far is one of my favorite stories
w so romantic...
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