Wow. Both this and it’s companion piece are excellent. I love that Jess and Tristan formed a sort of brotherhood. Bonding over their love of Rory and their shared messed up toe to Maggie. Who by the way I despise and love at the same time. I love how Jess kind of took her off Rory and Tristan’s hands for us. These two pieces were angsty, dark, genuine and thoughtful, you really wanted them to love each other. Wanted their love to make it. Felt their love. It was great.

Intense, strong story telling, mystical

i may be years late but i know your writing will continue to be read and appreciated by others. i did. this was a very good sequel and could hold its own.
i commend your style and i love the prose. it has this sentimental quality, angsty and raw in some parts. there's black with glimmers of white and patches of gray.

One of the best Trory stories ever written. I loved the integration of Jess and his involvement with Maggie. If you ever feel the itch to continue this plot line, I'll add my begging pleas in along with the other fans you've hooked. Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. I think it's fabulous.

LOVED LOVED MINUTE N SECOND OF READING THE WHOLE THING...U DONE AN AWSOME JOB!KEEP UP THE GR8 WORK N KEEP 'EM COMING!...WELL,U COULD PUT THE WHOLE THING 2GETHER OR LEAVE IT AS IT IS COZ BOTH FICS HAVE NICE REALLY LONG CHAPTERS...I LOVED THE JESS-MAGGIE THING,EVEN THO SHE WAS A COMPLETE BITCH N HATING HER IN THE 1ST PLACE!GOSH THE FIC WAS TOTALLY EXCELLENT,U GOT ALL THE INGREDIENTS AND IN JUST THE RIGHT PROPOTION!U SHUD SERIOUSLY THINK OF ANOTHOR SEQUEL OF WEN THEY'R IN COLLEGE U KNOW?BUT THATS UP2U COZ ITS GREAT AS IT IS...!LOVIN IT!GR8 JOB,THANX!

loved it update soon

Oh my gosh...this and Escaping the Inescapable were awesome stories. I love your writing. I hope you write more! This story was just so full of emotion and feeling...*sigh* it was just so great!

OMG i love this story! Ive read it like, 15 times before but i still love it! NEVER STOP WRITING! I was cracking up about the sex on Mr. Medina's desk thing..only Lorelai would be really cool about that!

This story is so fantastic! I love your writing style, it really lends beauty to your work. You keep the characters from falling flat and instead give them true depth.

Wow...i cant believe how good that story is! Its amazing, I don't think i've read anything like it. Please please write a trilogy! It is amazing and i cant say that enough! Please please please never stop writing!

I totally enjoyed this! Even Loved it!

-Summer

Both parts were very good. I think you should leave it like it is. I absolutely love your style of writing. The way you describe things and the words you use it's like I can really see all of it myself. You should deffinetly keep on writing.

i loved it. one of the best written trory's i've read. write more!

loved the entire fic, from start to end, and I hope you write many more.

so so so good