Wow. Thank you for the best Star Trek fanfic I have ever read. Your authors notes were as much of a gem as your chapters. I see this has been posted awhile ago and really hope that someone has picked you up for professional writing. Thanks again for all the time you spent on this. It was truely a joy to read.

Cool. I like an aggravated Spock. That woman just wouldn't stop poking him with a stick.

Thank you for the adventure. I really enjoyed the series.

"preferred sight of the new Vulcan colony"

site not sight

Interesting story so far.

It's hangar not hanger, and cinched not synched (kirk's sweats last chapter).

This was the first fic that I read in this fandom, and God, it’s my absolute favorite. This is the fourth time I’ve read it because it’s just pure perfection. I love other Star Trek fics, but I just keep coming back to this one because it hits everything perfectly.

Wow. This is...so good!? I don't know why I've never seen this before!? This fic...cleared my acne. Replenished my bank account. Soothed my soul. Made my dreams a reality. I know this fic is from...ahem...a while ago. But you should know that I read in all in the span of a few hours. Because of reasons. This was just flat out amazing. Idk what I can say that you haven't already heard...but this is the good shit right here.

- Pan

I love your story so much ! It's so well written and I love how every character is perfectly represented Kirk is surprising everyone and they learn to respect him and not take him for an idiot that just had chance to enter Starfleet Academy. Also I love your explanation between the end of the Nero incident and the day he becomes the youngest Captain of Starfleet history!
I have a little something to add on the Chapter 7 when they speak French. I'm not here to criticize because I love every non-french speaker trying ! So here's a tip for you . The mother speaking with her daughter would use 'tu' all the time because they are close to each other. But she would say 'vous' to Kirk because she doesn't know him and because it would be disrespectful to address him with 'tu' since he is a Captain.
Mother to OpheliaLaisse-moi te regarder. Tu es si pâle. Tu as dû avoir si peur. Est-ce que tu vas bien ?"
Mother to KirkVous êtes un ange".
Otherwise it's an amazing job ! And I love how Kirk is really close to the children because he knows how to make them smile and laugh ! And the crew trying to figure how he is good this good in Russian, French and with kids

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This was so good I couldn't put it down all day until I finished it. It was so beautiful and so evocative and I adored every second of it. Thank you for this absolute masterpiece!

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Oh. My heart. This was perfect. The development of the plot, of their relationship, the end of Peters especially! Just. Perfect.
Thank you for this beautiful story.

The red strings of fate :)

Love this story so much.

not only is this in the top 5 most amazing fanfics i’ve read since i found fanfiction 10 years ago, this chapter is probably THE most wonderful. i wish i could explain how much i love it. you’re a beautiful writer.

I am so glad I stumbled upon your story! Thank you for sharing your talent!

Absolutely love love love this fic! Cannot shower you or it with enough praise!