you're an incredible story teller. my heart is racing like I'm there in the story! I can't wait to keep reading!

Excellent chapter.

I kept myself reading to see if Booth was going to show up soon. I had a feeling he was Deuce. Loving this story line.

These are just observations not complaints. So I saw the description for your new story, and it sounded interesting. I am reading the first one as suggested. However, I feel very empty about Booth not being here. It just seems so wrong. I know there was a mention of things not being what they seemed, so I am reading on. I am enjoying your writing. Will I eventually find out how the FBI handled Booth's death? Just curious. Thanks for writing.

Heartbreakimg. Have tears in my eyes. Trust the writer that all will end well.

Harding is a great character. Awesome talk between him and Brennan.

You definitely know how to surprise your readers. Wow

Sweet Brennan, living in Booth's apartment, driving the same car he did. Thanks for including Max in your story. It's always great to have him appearing.

It's strange seeing Brennan working with someone other than Booth.

Immediately fell in love with Antonia. You wrote her so that I could really picture her.

What a start. My heart is aching for Brennan. Alone and pregnant. Terrific writing.

This is one of the best Bones stories I've read to date. I'm a B&B girl all the way. So, for me to say that even though they were not together through this whole story is saying something. The relationship you developed between Booth & his daughter was amazing. I love that there's more to this story. But at the same time, if it had ended here, I wouldn't have to deal with the future grief that I'm sure will come forth. Here, they are all together, & that's what matters the most. Although, what about poor Parker who thinks his dad is dead? Well done girls. I absolutely loved this!

Well crap if you didn't do it again. I'm going to have to rehydrate after reading this story. That child just breaks my heart. She loves Booth more than her mom, if that's possible.

OMG, you guys are great at this. The intensity & suspense is killing me. Their poor baby girl.

Damn, I didn't think I could cry any more. But you just made me ball my freaking eyes out. That was the saddest scene ever. Uhg!