Love it should make it a twoshot

You should show the recovery in the story

Should add more and continue the story.

"That's a nasty reflex you've got." I can completely picture Sean saying this.

One of my favorite movies is 'The Fast and the Furious: Tokyo Drift'. This short story of what could have happened when they were confronted is really unbelieveably good. I almost think that this would have been better then the original scene in the movie. I really liked it.

You chould another story with them together(:

I loveddd this one:D.

Good Job.

I like it. That little bittersweet moment. It's atrange how a trajedy can bring people closer together. It suddenly hits a person how they would feel if the other person was gone.

aw that was real sweet! i liked it u did a vry good job:)

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