Reviews for Daddy Lies
g chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
oh this one's easy, cause he's an asshole! :p
Lupa Dracolis chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Is it odd that the person I feel most sorry for is Dumbledore? Wow, this is... I'm not sure what the right word would be. Haunting, possibly.
Ron'sCousin chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I liked how it was more of a poem then a story. It was very interesting how you were able to tell a story threw questions. The only thing I didn't like was how sad it was. Although it was still very well written. Poetic.
RavenEcho chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Interesting, I suppose, though not the best work I've ever read. It would also be easier to read if it weren't in bold and in italics.
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
A great story. Very well written.
Maykai chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Oh so sad.

i loved it.

poor innocent little boy having to see all that.

poor innocent little boy under the stairs, i wanted to cry.
Ultimatly Heroic chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Forgive me for stating the obvious but that was really sad [

Good job thoughh,.
GiantInflatableWalrus chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Great job; this has a lovely flow to it, a sort of rhythm - I like the balance of the morbid reality of what happened, and the child's innocent questioning.
Vince from Shamwow chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
This is sad, dude.

):

Good job though.