Great story!

Love it! It's pretty realistic too, at least I would say. That's how they would get together after the war ended.

Thanks for sharing

Wow, this fic is good! I love it!

Genijalna prica! Nadam se da cu ih jos vise ovakvih procitati!

Poz Imocanka

es sasu you take the right decision, this rock conutry trip is a sucess! love your work !

That was a great story. Loved it!

I really like what you've done with the Naruto-finally-drags-Sasuke-back-to-Konoha plot! The brief mentions about how the 4th war changed the Hidden Countires and how Naruto had and hadn't grown up since Sasuke defected are perfectly placed and give the story a lot of depth.

And you've got a knack for a realistic-sounding Sasuke POV which is hard to find in fic sometimes ;)

S.W.

LOVED it!

Hey, I really enjoyed this story. It was well-characterized and funny with depth. The only thing I want to say is that some of the dialogue didn't sound natural because there weren't enough contractions. When there aren't enough contractions, the dialogue will sound example, Sakura says, "But...we are safe here." It would sound more natural for her to say, "But...we're safe here." There was some of that in the narrative too, some wordings that were awkward or stilted.

However, my favorite part of the entire story was when Naruto was getting his clone to put rocks on his back and Sasuke was just like '...' It made me laugh. XD

Such wonderful work!

shittttt. that was so good, too. they're all so good! i found phrases i just adored. and then i stopped copying and pasting as i got so into the end. i adore your characterization. sasuke in denial... yes. and how he reacted after the cave, running away like that and making up excuses... and naruto's reactions. they were really perfect and it annoys me that anything i say about your stuff is becoming repetitive and inadequate.

LINES:

Sasuke shot back, "No, you should have trusted me to head back first if I thought Sakura was in danger."

Naruto never looked at him quite like that, like he was amused and curious and maybe also a little eager, without a single trace of fear that Sasuke would disappear as soon as he blinked.

What, a dare to admit it? Or a dare to deny it?

I liked all of these because I thought they conveyed so much. That first line gave so much insight into what happened when Naruto didn't listen to him.

Same for the second and third, but the third really got to me because... it was just so true. I don't know how you have so much control over them that you can convey so much through their simple dialogue without overdoing it, or overexplaining it. I'm quite envious to be honest. There was nothing in this writing that was unnecessary. You conveyed as much through description as you did dialogue, and somehow, the dialogue was, still, just... perfect. Plus they were so IC. Everyone was, and everyone was real and enjoyable. Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, even Shikamaru...

but on top of that... to write canon is difficult enough, but you blended canon with... wonderful writing. you really made it your own, and it's so hard to find someone who can do that without making it seem as if it took effort. which i'm sure it did!

but it was really great. i loved all the details and... from the crystals to the bat cave... i also love how you make your characters so conscious of what's happening. i mean, any of what happened could've turned cliche or been used as some really terrible plot devices... but your characters are always aware of those moments and use them in a way that anyone would in real life. i don't know how to describe it other than... the consciousness you give naruto, sasuke, and sakura... is very realistic. but realistic without you seeming like you did that on purpose or as a style. it's so natural.

god i am so envious right now but so damn grateful you write at all. it's great having free time to be reading your stuff. i feel like i'm learning a lot by reading you, too.

thank you!

the UST build up in this fic was hot, great Naruto and Sasuke interaction - as per usual, oh and perfect last liner had me grinning like a manic idiot for the rest of the night. this goes into top 5 3

I loved it. Especially now that I know the difference between stalagtights and stalagmites. D

Nice story!

I think I commented on this over at ygal...but yeah, great story!

Thanks for sharing!