aw, it's kinda sad this story isn't gonna get continued and is up for adoption...It's a good story! I read it in one day because it's so interesting and good! I love it! I also love fics where Light has the shinigami eyes

I cant stop laughing lmaoo sayu noo

Wait. The text Light sent was at 3:08, but L's reply was at 3:04. ? But I really like the story

The story is amazing even though it probably won't be updated any time soon. I could compliment about all the things that make the story amazing but I'm just here to complain about the fact that the author left at a cliffhanger. It's very frustrating. I don't know how the story would progress or how it will end. But who am I to complain anyway, the author would most likely not respond nor update the story so my "efforts" are futile.

- a reader in 2019 :(

I luv it but I pity sayu!

Liz Yeriod. I am going to say this now, we will never meet, I don't know you and you don't know me obviously. But your writing styles, personality, and bio fit someone I knew so well. My sister, she passed in 2013 of May, and it broke me completely. I became distant, depressed, and suicidal for quite some time and I found fanfiction, and I would read and read, hoping that the next story I would read the emotions felt in the stories would feel would rub off on me. They never did, but anyways. I read your story, and grew obsessed with it. And when I finished it, I tried so hard to desperately cling onto every word you would type because my sister would have stories so eerily similar to this I thought this was her. She had a secret account and would put up all her stories and I would search hours and hours for it, and I found your story and account. I forced myself to believe this was her, because a piece of her will always haunt me and make me believe that she never left. I know this is completely irrelevant but, I can't. The agony, it hurts knowing that Ill never hear her typing up stories and giving me her dorky smile every time I came home. I'm here typing this at 2 in the morning because of how badly this has affected me, and the reason is because it somewhat makes me feel more consoled typing this, although it's a bitter-sweetness feeling. Well, I'm going to wrap things up, I'd like to adopt "Another Detective" if that's still possible, if not, then thank you for reading this. You are truly gifted with your words and it pains me not to see another update from you, and I'd like to give you the best of luck, Author-San and other Reviewers.

i love it! keep going!

When is l and light going to fuck

i love your story but i hate that you made SAYU kira :( [from frown]

*looks in author's ear* hello is anybody home if you are please update

wait why is this not updated skfnvmvdm Noooo

This is excellent and despite the K rating, I am enjoying it immensely. If you could raise the rating due to a smut scene I would be really happy. Hope to see an update soon

Can't wait for more and seriously love this story _

Gah, at first I was repelled by the poor plotting and unnatural LxLight but soon I saw how the story transformed into more plot and less hormonal takeover! And now it's dead at the good part! Damn it. I really want to read more.

Please please please please please please please please please continue!