This is good...he lost all his stuff..like his cloak and photo albums of his parents...the firebolt from sirius and hedwig...i do hope that she got out safely.

Abandoned the rewrite too? Really? A shame. A good story.

I'm disappointed: Ryan Ron? and Damian Draco? I'd hoped for more differences in this new world.

Harry still hasn't found out how he ended up a mage outside of the magical world. The curiosity is killing me.

Isn't harry at all curious - as I am - to find out how he came to be a magical born to wizard parents?

I wish your Harry was more the "i'm not going to take any crap from anyone" type of person. Yours is pathetic.

I'm annoyed at Harry for not doing his due diligence to read up on the world he is joining. He doesnt exhibit much sense given how it was mentioned in an earlier chapter that he was a frequenter of a library.

It's to bad you stopped this story. I rather like it.

I there any way you are going to continue this story?

I like this fic and the changes made, however, I must admit that I prefer the plot line of Shades of Gray better.

I do wish you would go back to that fic and finish it .. pretty please with a cherry on top?

Another amazing story with another completely different plot. I look forward to reading more of it.

love it...

Granny Minnie

This story seems really interesting. I don't know if you'll be updating soon, or even f you plan on updating ever again, but I hope you do. I like your explanation of the differences between the three groups of beings.

Amazing! Your writing skills and dedication are phenomenal. I read through your original Shades of Gray- which I loved, including the title (;

The rewrite is nice, but also very confusing, as I came to read it as soon as I saw your author note. I also finished reading both in the same two consecutive days.

With that being said, it's a fantastic story, and I totally understand- life comes first. But the story hasn't been updated for 2 years, nearly, which is leading me to believe that you have abandoned this fic. If you have time, I would greatly appreciate if you replied to this review- I don't wish to take up any of your time, but just so that I'm not left hanging, it would be nice to know if you plan on coming back to the story... someday.

The plot's phenomenal, and you can really pull off writing a Magical Being Harry. Not a lot of writers can do that with a good plot. Thank you for this breathtaking piece of literature! (:

All the best,

Grey

Good so far. I liked the theory. There's enough familiarity for me to think I must have read SoG at some point. I hope you decide to continue this.