Reviews for Four Lives
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
All of these Four pieces so far have been brilliant and well composed, but this is the first one to make me cry.
Massive mechanical hands gentle enough to pick up a coconut crab and carry a stretcher, strong enough to tear a building apart so a family might have a body to mourn.
Agent ERA chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Aw the last one was so sad. Please tell me that wasn't Lennox that Prime was holding. Beautifully witten.

Question for you. Do you still write Tranformers fic? And if so, are you open to any plotbunnies for it. Mine eould be mostly gen centered around Will.
animelover1993 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Aw man. . . the last one made my heart clench almost painfully and I ended up crying...

Who was that? Lennox? God, that had to've been horrible.

But the other four were pretty.. especially the poor crab (lol)
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Okay. I cried. I never cry, not at fanfic, not at weddings, not unless one of my cats is done with this phase of existence. I cried.
Splatter Fall chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
;_; okay I'm sad now. Absolutely wonderful story, beautifully written and I would have read it even if I knew how depressing it was, but yeah, SAD NOW. ;_;
Eclectic Butterfly chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Loved it as much as the others! The last one was so sad!

I just wanted to add, I particularly enjoy your writing since I also happily ignore the comics and transformers cartoons!
Borath chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
A really enjoyable story - touching and tender with some sprinkles of humour. You have a particular knack with Ironhide, I must say!

Thank you for writing this! _
Deepclaw chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
omg I love this! I love how you wrote Optimus and him saving the crab? Brought a tear to my eye.

Number 5, though, is what made me really teary though. That was so sad and so OPish. ;_;

And then the one with Ironhide! Gosh, I love this. I'm going through and reading your Four series from the beginning now. xD Your writing is excellent and they're all so IC. :'D Thank you so much for sharing!
flamingmarsh chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
wow, this was great.

you did a good job and you did good on Optimus.
crimsonseastorm chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Beautiful...you've again done an excellent job capturing characters here. Optimus is difficult to write you have to find the right balance between leader and friend. You've done an excellent job...I will say I wish Part 5 was part of a longer story. Knowing what happened before, who they were fighting, and the aftermath of it would be an excellent story I think. Just my thoughts...off to read another of your wonderful stories...
Soului chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
That last one was so incredibly sad. Very, very well done though.
CheapChristmasTrash chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Once again, this is beautifully written and very moving. That last part almost made me cry, especially reading it just after Four Times. As always, the whole story was just excellent!
Katnip Corodva chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
that was great story. keep up the good work.
hummergrey chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
WOW! Pure emotion. Real and what life is. Keep writing.
Abandonment Personified chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
I don't have words to describe how well-written this fic is.

Excellent work.
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