| Reviews for Minato's accidental time travelling incident! |
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   MeowwZie chapter 1 . 2/11 I just started reading and i'm not continuing it so i can stop wasting my time trying to see the good promise this story has only to be shattered by the trash writing style and scene development. If you ever read this comment please refrain yourself from writing for some time and start reading books or other stories so you can finally learn how to write. I'm telling you this as a fellow 14 year old girl which can't believe the level of immaturity writing style this story has taken upon itself. I also can't help but think that you must have been 10-11 years of age when you wrote this story. Long story short I am telling that i'ts a good story structure but shit writing style. Phew... I finally got this thing off my chest seeing as i have come here dozens of times thinking about telling you the reality trying to get your head out of the clouds of comments like: "This story is SO GREAT!" "This story is HILARIOUS" "Hahaha you're so funny! I love your story"- and other shit like that which i 100 percent believe were written by other 10-11 year olds or some idiots that find this entertaining or "it's more simple for the to read" Seriously, i have never ever been so harsh with someone but i felt that someone had to do it. Ciao! I hope the best for you, and i hope you learned smth. If you didn't well... IDK! |
| Agni chapter 39 . 1/14 'mazing story, Dont hate,but I wouldve preferred Obikaka than Kakashi x Hana though...and,Kakashi never had children. Dont hate me!No offence! Great story though. |
| Anonymous chapter 21 . 7/6/2019 First of all, Naruto is the Seventh Hokage not the Sixth, just in case you didn’t know. Secondly, with all these made up names, it’s kinda confusing. Naruto’s kids are Himawari and Boruto. Sasuke’s daughter is named Sarada. Shikamaru’s son is named Shikadai. And Neji is dead and Tenten married Lee and their son is Metal Lee. |
| bmidd111 chapter 9 . 3/24/2019 Um, the movie is called "Grease" not Grease Lightning |
| Monster King chapter 39 . 11/15/2018 Great job |
| sonic chapter 39 . 8/14/2018 I liked the chapter!12 |
| Samira Vongola chapter 39 . 3/12/2018 I hope you update soon |
| shinshinjane chapter 19 . 3/4/2018 Nice south park. |
| Ominousity chapter 39 . 11/5/2017 More RWBYParody |
| Fangirl chapter 11 . 1/19/2017 NARUTO WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!? |
| Fangirl chapter 10 . 1/19/2017 Kabuto x'D |
| Me chapter 38 . 10/7/2016 Am In Luu,best Fic Ever |
| Guest chapter 39 . 9/18/2016 Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee, uuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppdddddddddaaaaaaatttttteeee! (please update!) |
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/16/2016 Damm Naruto |
