Reviews for Prototype Naruto
Guest chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
que pena tava gostando.
How to change avatar chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
What the heck is blacklight, and what other abilities does Naruto have. Other than that great story. Oh if you don't mind, I might take some ideas from this story for my story.
Wolfone10 chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Wish you would continue. Pretty good, Ibki was a little long winded.. BUT all in all pretty good NaruProto story
Halo12094 chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
YOU SIR! MUST FINISH THIS!
Eien Samsara chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
like it
garsdal chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
you say you have a bad title, I say I've seen a whole lot worse.

its a decent story, and a prototype crossover, which we lack a lot off here on ff, so good work.

narusaku, not me favorite, but when Sakura is well written its good. we haven't seen much of her yet, and i hope you live up to expectations.
C.a.s chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I like it. Not love but like. I never am a fan for the all powerful naruto fics but this seems reasonable. I like how he seems to discover his powers as be goes along and does not think as himself as stronger n smarter then this teamates. It tends to bore me when they KNOW there powerful ya know? But please do continue :) i really do wanna know what happends
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Please write the next one soon I can tell it will be amazing
JackOfAllTrades-MasterOfSome chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Just re-read this, and I have to say it is a very well written fic, and I can't wait for Naruto to start running up buildings and consuming enemies. This is one of the better Proto-Naruto crossovers I have read in some time. Keep up the good work.
JNARUSAKUROCKS chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
GREAT STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Akuma021 chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
very good!, there aren't any spelling that i can see, the plot seems interesting, and the beginning is plausible, overall its going to be pretty good and i cant wait for you to update.

signed

ghostlord
link the hitman chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
i got a good name how about this is my story
Fyoex chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Never heard of Prototype, but love the story! Keep going!
Maverick Hunter Phoenix chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Great start! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work! Title suggestions? Hmm...considering I don't really know what you decided the history of the Blacklight virus would be, how about something along those lines?
master of cheese graters chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
I understand that it says NaruSaku for the pairings, but could we make it a harem? I like those. And God need harems.

Also, will Naruto have a Web of Intrigue equivalent in this?

And will you be using all of the powers and devastators?

Will he consume people to satisfy simple hunger? (I know I would.)

That's all my questions for now.
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