seriously dude get a grip. not everything you write is gay. well maybe just a little but it was good.

That was so sweet!

Great job and keep writing!:)

So I don't know how you came up with this in ten minutes, but for something so shortly made, it's pretty... good. :)

The best part of this story is its realism. Sasuke and Sakura act as Sasuke and Sakura would. To be honest it's just both of their pretenses flinging at each other and to see who loses first. Of course Sakura is the one to break down but that doesn't mean Sasuke's won; he chooses to give into her and they're both at a twisted right loss. I think you got Sakura pretty much point-on.

Overall the story's atmosphere is soft and gentle, despite all the heartbreak that's shimmering underneath the surface. I love how simple and touching it truly is.

Well done.

awww... i really,really liked it. By:Hizashi Uchiha

awww this was one was a sweet

Dude... this was so FUCKING beautiful.

Poetic in a category of its very own...

I fucking LOVED it.

Ferserious.

Fantastic, as always. (:

~Sasuke-sama

aw so cute i love it

Aww..Aww..Aw..It's a sweet story of you. I love SasuSaku pairing! I love this...

And its ending is so touching...

Really, really cute (:

I love it, Xena. The original phrase is lovely, fits in so well. Loved the whole storyline, even though it was a short story :D Awesomesauce, dear.

Aw...

Aww so fluffy 3

Aw so cute!

Aww so cute so cute! Damn you Sasuke for hurting her! Hehe ) Good luck with school! D

-x-Emma-x-

hohoho:D sweet!

holycrap.

:D

:D

:D

squee.

yes. thats all :)