Ya you did you stupid bitch!

please continue i want to know if they make up

Your story is really good and many people want you to continue. I love it and don't worry about it being short. Please update soon I want to know what happens to the treasure hunter especially Riley. Update soon. Please.

Please update!

Please update!

You are letting the Briley seep through. I love it! Why is it that this is the one fandom where everyone's against slash? I mean, a friendship story is okay, but why accentuate the fact that it's just friendship between the characters? There really aren't enough Briley stories to warrant all the fuss in the first place. Anyway, besides the chapters being a bit on the short side the story is good so far and I hope that you update again. I'd really like to read about Ben finding Riley and how angry/concerned/protective he is because he's Ben. (and turn it into slash in my head) Even if this becomes a forgotten story and is never updated again, good job so far!

Please update soon!

Ooookay some explainer into why she's such a bitch. Much appreciated, but what about Riley!

EPIC bitch! Whatever I never liked her anyway. Great story I like the way you stage Riley's break down. He seems to go through different phases of anger and grief, and then it just all piles up. Really great!

please update soon :)

O.M.G.! PLZ write more! I'm freakin in love with this story!

Updaaaaaaaaaaaaaate. D: How could you leave poor Riley hanging like this?

Lovely angst~ And nice job with the plot. c:

Butbutbut! I like slash! It makes me feel all warm inside... What if you just kept it mild? Like, it could be read as either slash or just friendship? Or maybe, just one sided Briley? I do understand your predicament though. Everything I write is slash. Except that one that has no pairings. That I didn't even realise had no pairings cause it was going to have slash but didn't.

Excuse the ranting, I've no internet for a week, and this is the first thing I reviewed. Cause I love it that much. Yes, you should feel special :D

Anyway, I know that this hasn't been updated in... seven months, but please come back and finish this! I would love you forever, and ever, and ever, and ever, and ever...

Please, oh awesome one?

~Vithian

Ah! Riley! :'( NO! Oh my LIFE! I want to give him a hug... like NOW! Ahem... so... yea... I thinks you've done a really good piece of descriptive writing. Oh... ANOTHER cliffhanger! O_o! NOOO! How will I survive? And thanks for posting by the way ;) Scuse my obssesive (did I even spell that right?) fangirlishness :P

Please write more...