Omg in bed laughing so much hahaha nearly choking meself

I always laugh when I read this story and your conclusion is priceless! :)

great story! you won't believed how much i laughed!

hahahhaaa.. funny :) DOCCWA? yes, that's a reasonable excuse :)

A great story. Very well written.

Ok, i know this is only a oneshot, but if you got someone to beta it, it would be fabulous. Not that it isnt already ribcrackingly funny, just that I believe it needs those well placed commas to make it brilliant. Great writing though, EM.

That was funny! I was laughing my a$$ off!

Love it, Poor Carlisle and the crazy obessed nurses, and their overly active imangations, poor Esme having them think that she killed her husband with a frying pan.

Haha! Cute story! I'm thinking you need to write another chapter about the nurse's next adventure stalking Carlisle.

Loved the last line! This was great! Hilarious!

Eminnis

How many times have I thwacked Carlisle round the head with a frying pan now?

I haven't stopped laughing! Great ending line!

This is very cute loved it!

DUDE. That was a beautiful (and hilarious) work of art. Absolutely phenomenal story! By all means keep writing! -Emma

Excellent. It was a good read. Very... interesting.

(Evil laughs)

*I must remember that, it is an excellent plan*

hahahah oh I loved this! good job :)