It was cute, then it made me sad. But ahhh well done!

Although this is just conversational monologue it was actually pretty amusing and I could get the jest of the story transpiring between the two boys as they became older and more attached to one another. Still love it how they have to throw out the "I dare you" remark to win the battle of verbal challenges. But I liked how in the end it transformed from "I dare you" to "Do it because you love me" which I have to say is hard not to agree on for most people when love is at stake.

Beautifully done! There needs to be more of this pairing!

That was very sweet. Incest is weird though, right? In real life you're programmed to think of it a certain way, but in some fics it's so hot!

So Cute

Is it so painful to have to say ass

Is it so peinful to right ass!

I'm going to hell for not reviewing this when I first read it.

Or the second or third time.

Obviously, the dialogue isn't enough for me and I want moooore. But that's all part of the beauty, isn't it? Always leave the crowd wanting more.

Anywhoo, you're the first fanfiction I have ever read that included a foot fetish. I applaud you on that, because outside of S&M and food, fetishes aren't explored much on this site (so far as I have read). That, and you definitely made the foot fetish thing seem attractive. Which means you're a great writer, I would say.

I definitely encourage you to let your fetish flag fly in future fics and I'll follow you forever. (All alliterations are awesome.)

Much fanfic love,

Aeromance

Oh, that is adorable :]

They're cute

Cute!

Gahh.. I don't know what to tell you.. I loved this stoy.. Gosh.. It was perfect in all ways. And sort of sad too.

LOVED IT, just so you know ;)

PussPuss

Flamestodustloverstofriends

woah! e last part was... 0o woah!

I love it! Just like it. And kinda hot too.

Oh, I just loved this so much. I loved the foot fetish part; not too many people add things like that to their fics so it was a nice change. :3