| Reviews for Demon? |
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   noplaynogame3 chapter 60 . 6/21 abondonad? |
| ob chapter 1 . 5/13 very very nice |
| ryker55mc chapter 44 . 4/29 Sooo he has the kyuubi acting like a high school girl inside naruto.. He reads porn... He gets fucking easily deceived i though he was smarter than that since he has the kyuubi giv8ng him advice.. Gues not... Stopping reading this then bye |
| TheRealCacto chapter 60 . 7/26/2019 Perfect memory recall and a glance at the forbidden scroll, let the techniques roll baby, and then blame it on his eyes |
| AcidESP chapter 60 . 7/20/2019 It's a good story, it's a shame that it's not updated, see you, bye! |
| god of all chapter 60 . 5/5/2019 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Monster King chapter 60 . 4/9/2019 Great job please continue the story |
| Rebmul chapter 60 . 1/25/2019 I can kinda see how this story died 60 chapters in and this appears to be just after team assignment good lord I understand wanting to build things up but you dragged this out so much you killed your story. I jumped to the last page thinking you were almost done and your not even like 5% of the way into the actual series. I'm not sure what could take this long to show. |
| Borello chapter 60 . 9/29/2018 damnit. the story is great. i hoped to read more chapter. |
| fluffy-fanfic-lover chapter 60 . 9/4/2018 update soon |
| D chapter 60 . 3/4/2018 While the story depth is good you have to realize that the reader wants to go forward. You took sixty chapters to finish through to the genin exams. True your chapters were fairly short; still progress lacked. That is the only true flaw I see in the story. I don't critique on grammar or usage unless it is absolutely horrid. Mostly writers have grounding in the use of each but often rely on proofreaders and editors to find flaws. |
| Rosenkruz chapter 38 . 2/11/2018 Why have you got Raiton listed as a Bloodline? Katon, Suiton, Doton, Futon, and Raiton are the 5 Basic Elements. No Combinations required to gain them. Also, Katon Suiton Futton (Boil Release, aka Vapor Style). Just seems weird to me. |
| LarryP33 chapter 30 . 2/6/2018 Never understood how Naruto could be 12 yrs. Old unless he's 15 now. Also it would be nice to c pictures of Kyuubi in her human form. Otherwise gr8 chapters and explanations. & much |
| korlinki chapter 1 . 1/9/2018 2/10 weak story |
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/5/2017 Yo can u plz continue or at least tell us y u have not written for a few years I know ur still active u have stories that we're recently added to ur favorite's I just have to look at their publish date |
