...Epilogue? Bones remembered anyway and still treats Jim with respect..maybe with a birthday favor/tradition cause Jim finds out Bones was sad that day?

that was really cool I was wondering if u had any thoughts on a sequel

hot *damn*, i just came in my pants. -wipes blood from keyboard-

this was angsty and perfect and hot iin ALL the right ways. this fucking *hurt*, man, it was so awesome.

signed,

onewhowatches :3

Dear, that was funny. I certainly hope Bones is happy with the... arrangement. ;)

~Fern Rose

DAMN that was hot.

Poor Jim, AND poor Bones. This was rough and very sweet, and I liked it a LOT.

I reckon Bones can make Jim come right?

Ok. this was totally believable to me. Something about Jim all but seducing McCoy in a strip club just amuses the crap outta me. And then McCoy trying desperately to pretend like he wasn't turned on to be sitting next to the kid? Still more hysterical lol

BTW, I jsut had a chapter 2 show up in my watchlist but now it's not part of the story.. is ffn glitching out?

Please write a sequel to this. like one where Bones finds out that Jim was the stripper.

Overall very good (and by "good" I mean "hot"), but one little thing caught my eye.

"more than one inFrankce of fucking did"

About that.