fantastic! gorgeous! i loved it! piece master! thank yoy for sharing your art!

You're story is brilliant. There's not much too it but its really entertaining to read. Good work on a job well done. :)

Wow! I've never seen a writing style quite like this...and I'm liking it :D It was catchy and engaging and completely original. It felt like the flow was right along with the story book, but you wrote your own story, if that makes any sense. It was smart and witty and truly one of the best one-shots with a classic theme that I've ever read. I'd like to read more from you.

R.M.

The way you wrote this was very interesting. I've never read anything like this, and on top of that I didn't think you could pull that all the way though the story. Also the story itself was very cute and was a very interesting version. Goodjob.

well done the style made me giggle, plus the whole plot. :) i loved it

wow this was really good I liked it alot

Haha, I like the style you wrote this in! You're right, this definitely has a lot of attitude, lol! Very fun piece. Especially like all of the red references.