Reviews for Emily's Revenge?
cmitc41 chapter 15 . 1/12/2018
I just found this story today and I couldn't stop reading it... Then I see that you are a writer of another favorite of mine "scarecrow and mrs king". I look to see what else you have written and some of your stories are all time favorites. Thank you for not letting your wonderful imagination in the way your portray these "friends" of mine become lost... It is better to have these stories be unfinished, then lost. This allows us, your fans to enjoy them the way you enjoy them.
what-if-joana chapter 3 . 10/21/2016
Your writing is so good, I had to check out one of your other stories. The chapters fly by easily and I'm enjoying the story so far.
I wanted to drop you a quick review to tell you how much I liked the comparison of Luke and Richard. I've never seen it before and it's very fitting. Well done!
Droolia chapter 14 . 6/29/2016
I'm kind of torn with this one. Would I let her stay home and pout or force her to go. If forced, she may act out. That may be bad, but is it as bad as really knowing that your mom doesn't support you at all even though you knew it already?
Droolia chapter 13 . 6/29/2016
I'm so glad she came home and they worked things out. Emily's interference really did complicate things on all angles. I think Luke made the right call to leave them on the sofa for the night. They did need that time.
Droolia chapter 12 . 6/28/2016
Rory came home! Big step.
Droolia chapter 11 . 6/28/2016
Game over. I just read the best thing on fan fiction in this chapter. Luke bringing a folder of references for Rory to read. Bam! I've been reading fics since 2009, and I read a lot of stories. Every day. Relatively quickly too, though not so much now with a husband and toddler in tow :) but props to you. The only thing I read that beat this was back during my Twilight days on a little website called twilighted. I'm sorry, I was one of those, but hey, it introduced me to this wonderful world of stories that I wouldn't need a lamp to read. :)

I can't believe Rory stayed. I thought Luke's move was a slam dunk. I can't believe that even after Emily left crying, that she still attacked lorelai. I was just feeling bad for her to. She seemed all broken and human and she got vicious again. I'm with lorelai, don't look back.
Droolia chapter 10 . 6/28/2016
Knowing that lorelai is active and hearing it are two completely different things. Please keep it quiet for his sake.

I think it's cool that you took the best and worst character traits of Emily and Richard and amplified them. It keeps them in character and keeps the story realistic.

I'm glad Richard came and tried to settle the dust a hit. I just hate that he didn't overhear Emily trying to poison Rory against her mother. That dinner that you've been building up to sounds like it's going to be epic.
Droolia chapter 9 . 6/28/2016
I can't believe that Emily is still hanging around stars hollow. It's crazy! Just let it go already. I'm surprised no one's taken this concept and seriously hired a hit man or something to take her out. Lorelai has been upfront and truthful about everything. Lorelai is a saint for dealing with her mother. Scary thing is that I can actually see Emily getting all deranged and doing this.
Droolia chapter 8 . 6/28/2016
Oh boy. Rory should have just stayed quiet with the last message. Everything could have been fixed before the dreaded dinner tomorrow. Why not just call her and correct her? Yell at her for making that assumption. It's going to get so much worse now.

I thought Emily was going to buy the Twickham house for Kirk.
Droolia chapter 7 . 6/28/2016
I can't imagine that an argument like that in the middle of the diner crowded like that doesn't start the tongues wagging.
Droolia chapter 6 . 6/28/2016
I'm glad there's still a Luke and lorelai and that we'll soon have our Gilmore girls together again. This is kind of un chartered territory for me. What if they make up this soon. Where does that leave Rory's academic future. Interesting and I can't wait to find out.
Droolia chapter 5 . 6/28/2016
Poor lorelai. Finding Emily's check like that. I understand Luke's point by not telling her, but that was too big of a secret to keep. I felt for Rory for not being in the loop, but apparently, lorelai has been calling. What's happening to the messages? I'm assuming sitting in voicemail, which puts this back in Rory. Still, it must not be easy to feel such an exclusion.

As for being on hiatus, I don't mind but thanks for telling me. I've realized that it's better to read really good (great plotlines, grammar free issues, realistic timelines and outcomes, etc)but incomplete stories than to read the cramp that sometimes gets posted because it's consistently updated or completed.
Droolia chapter 4 . 6/28/2016
Emily is crazy and I can't believe he gave all that info away. Now she knows and has a timeline for the wedding, that a baby is on the a way, and that Richard supports them. Oh boy.
Droolia chapter 3 . 6/28/2016
Unless Richard was a decoy, which I don't believe he is, he just bought himself a lot of trust.
Droolia chapter 2 . 6/27/2016
I hope she's pregnant!

I don't get why Emily doesn't listen to lorelai. Lorelai tells her exactly how she feels and what she needs, but Emily just brushed it all off. With s title like Emily's revenge, I'm really afraid for them. Hope Richard doesn't have to pay for Emily's choices.
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