Reviews for What Happens When You Fall Hard |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Breathe when I read that part I was listening to that's song! Dats cool right! Btw you're an amazing writer keep at it! |
![]() ![]() Great story! Gonna read the sequel now |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG PLZ PLZ PLZ KEEP WRITING! IM DIEING NOT KNOWING WHATS GOING ON NEXT! Xoxo thanks for writing a amazing story |
![]() ![]() I think this was a great story. I lived the little twist of the girls going to Blackthorne instead if the other way around. The story definetly have a lot of surprising plot twists and I'm glad there will be a sequel since the epilogue left a lot of questions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! My brothers and I all have names that start with A |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaah yeah wait, this was under revision. lets wait for the re-upates, cuz to be honest i liked the beginning more than the first chapters after that. but thats good, simce it means youre making progress. anyway, please please pretty please re-update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah, I read until chapter 6, and I understood what you are saying. It was very different from chapter 1... but anyway, I can relate to what youre saying, whenever i reread my first PJO story, i wonder why on earth people would even want to keep on reading... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this sounds liek a good beginning to a story. but, how could Solomon teach at both schools at the same time if they are ten hours apart? |
![]() ![]() Haha. Duke and Duchess. :) |
![]() ![]() You are an amazing writer two words: LOVE IT! Keep writing can't wait to read the next one thx :) |
![]() ![]() Uhhh Blackthorn's a school for assassins... Unless, of course, you're making it a spy school... I guess. Well, good luck! |
![]() ![]() i liked it, well done for your first finished story :) |
![]() ![]() fuck you Dana! I can't believe you did this to us! I trusted yu! |
![]() ![]() tails r of course CoC... always causing trouble |
![]() ![]() ummmm MARRY IT! IF YOU BURY IT I BURY YOU! |