Oh, was interesting

Jelp did post the story its "Hiss and Kiss" on her page for anyone who is waiting for it!

Great start xD

A short something - but a short something good! :)

I like the image of Naruto being the one, slightly crazy guy who dances along with his life, always being surrounded by music and not giving a shit.

The meeting in the doorway was a strange one, hu? But it makes you wonder what'll happen next (and I WILL find out! xD ).

I guess it's almost redundant to tell you your writing style is great; I'll say it nonetheless: I like your style! ;)

i would've raged soooooo bad if there was no sequel! OMG I LOVE IT .~~

I spent the last couple of days reading the great fic of The Eternity Dragon, Fish bird, and since I finished it a dozen hours ago, I can't seem to be able to read anythng else. I get bored after just the first sentences, and nothing seems to be close to as good as Fish Bird- this often happens to me after I've read a great story. But I found this fanfiction, and for the first time today, I managed to actually be interrested in what i'm reading :D ! And I want to read the next chapters too !

It was really short, but I loved it. I can totally picture Naruto and Sasuke acting exactly as you portray them. Great job!

Dell: Where's the smut!

Sea & Mel: *Sigh*

Mel: C'mon Dell, there's a nice man in a white suit waiting for you with his nice white van parked outside.

Dell: Hell yeah! If they ain't gonna get laid, I'm gonna get laid!

Sea: Hold up girl, I ain't letting that happen anytime soon, so drop it smart ass.

Dell: Why I oughta...

Mel: Um... I'll just say, thanks for the no smut thing, cause Dell's cuckoo and we're trying to get her enrolled in the mental hospital currently. :P

Nice:)

Loveeeeeeeeeee ittttt! ]] xoxo

Interesting read. Loved the description of the kiss and the rain at the end. Loved the characterizations of both Naruto and Sasuke: a dancing singing Naruto and Sasuke the social bastard. Nice as a stand alone but it really gives one a hankering for more so I'm so glad Jelp has continued it. _

I'm also glad I was brought back to your writing by these fics(Hiss; Hiss and Kiss). I'll be sure to look at anything new from you and reread the old. Ja.

~Kismet

... loved it! lol it was a good read for a rated T story. lol.

I love that it ended that way! Of course, that doesn't mean I'm not gonna read Hiss and Kiss XD By the way, where is the alert you promised?

*smile* It was good and it fit into my mood. )

I didn't know I hadn't reviewed this piece of art before, but you're one of my favorite fanfiction authors ever and since I an going to read Jelp's "Hiss and Kiss", need to review now! This is one of my favorite "and then?" stories! I loved it the way it is, but I REALLY don't mind reading what happens next. Seriously.

Honestly, I wouldnt have known this if not for Jelp. You two are awesome, should do more SasuNaru fics together. really really good. I commend you guys for that.