It's up to you ne? I like how the story is going though, just a few minor spelling errors I detected. Yet that's about it

Yes, please yes. While the whole idea was nice, and most situations were funny, the horrible spelling was giving me a headache. I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just saying that it would be good if you went over the story again and organized it well. I could help you if you like, I'd be happy to be of use as a beta-reader. If not, I just hope that you will pay more attention to order and grammar. Good day, and happy (re)writings!

~Jen

Awesome story i like it ..but

1)its not long and its to mashed together

JOKER RULES ..AWESOME STORY ..she should stay with Joker /\

lol nosebleed xDDDD , love your story, can't wait for the next chapters ;3; .

This is one of the best stories i have ever read. i can't stop reading over the chapters. you should totally write more chapters i love the whole pair of Ciel and Helena. I think it is so cute when he had that nosebleed XD. Pretty Pretty Pretty PLLEAASSE write more chapter, i would love to read more. I LOVE THIS STORY ANND I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE I JUST CAN'T GET ENOUGH :).!

I love the story. What I like about it the most is that someone added Grell into the story. PLEASE! PLEASE! Make more chapters this story is just getting good. OH! how I love to read good stories, and this just happens to be one of them. I love the Oc and the pairing I think everything think about it is great so far. I even like the GrellXSeb pairing so cute

anyway. Yeah I love the story and I want you to write more chapters so I can review about how much I love it thanks alot of making this story and I hope I get to read about what happens in the 3 Chapter :)! I hope to read more good reviews like this along the way KEEP IT UP :D!

duude! this is awesome...yet were not a fan of grellxsebby but yea we like cielxhelena...ciel is kinda OC but update please-Airi and Irie