The word 'incredible' doesn't even to begin to cover how amazing this was. Thank you for this. For sharing this with the world.

I'm going to start sending you my medical bills. This ridiculously good.

I didn't...I don't know...I just...

Wow. I just found this and it make me feel lucky. Thank you.

WOW. This is painful, heartbreaking, beautiful writing; so tender and yet so brutal in the reality of what has happened. *sniffles* Beautiful.

This story is so beautiful. You captured the essence of the charecters perfectly. Sublime.

This is just a beautiful story. You capture the nature of the characters so well!

I love it.

Okay, I know that this will be weird, getting a review after so long. But this was one of the first stories that I read and I loved it so much, but I didn't have an account and I couldn't remember who it was by or what it was called. But I found it. Yipee after so long of searching and giving up and trying again. And I wanted to tell you how much I love this story and it is one of the few that I remember from so long ago and I'm so pleased to have found it. Okay I'm going to be quiet now, but I thought that you would appreciate knowing :D

hey umm i kinda love this )

This is one amazing story! It's complex and clear and it just sounds so true to what coming back from Somalia must have been like.

omg I LOVE this! I loved the tenderness in it, your characterisation... everything. And that last line just killed me. Great work.

That made me cry. You are brilliant.

Darkly sweet. I got all tensed up reading that. I understand what you mean about Ziva being beautiful. That vulnerability was beautiful, I think, perhaps certain kinds of people are drawn towards it.

All your work is beautiful, it makes me despair of mine! *goes off to keep reading*

Wow. Really good.

Well I for one loved it! Bravo!