This one is sizzling hot without being vulgar. The perfect combo. Seriously. I ADORE all your one shots! And if it wasn't almost 6 AM and I didn't have to go to bed, I'd take the time to review each and every single one of them. Because they are impossibly hard to put down. I literally started from the beginning and ended up reading them all! Excellent characterization and plots!

oh my GOD. this is my first story i've read by you and damn that was good! and further than any of your other stories? aw well damn lol

Hmm... I think you should do a second chapter of this story... You totally teased us readers! I kind of wanted to kill Miley too. :P But seriously, Ch 2 could be round 2 of poker when Miley is gone - just an idea :P

Anyway, it was really good, and totally kept us on the edge of our seats the whole time. Great job. :)

awwww!love the loliver! great job!

~canadaroks~

i really, really love this story. i can read it again and again and it still is as funny, intense and absolutely great as the first time i discovered it.

it's so well written, you can feel, hear, smell and see them directly before yourself.

Oh you're very good. That's 2 HM fanfics on my favourites list now. Hell is under 6 ft of snow right now ;)

Awe man, this story was fantastic! I wish I could leave better reviews (especially after reading some of yours for that magazine you submit to) but I just don't really have anything better to say. It kind of left me tongue tied like the two main characters ;)

You fulfilled my expectation and what's more you fulfilled them beyond expectations. This was awesome and I'm only mad that I didnt get to read this earlier on.

Every little thing they felt, they excitement , the tension the nervousness, it was all so well detailed that it had been suppress my giggling in anticipation. Kind of like cover my mouth and chew on the skin. And what's more, I could really see this happening.

But more than anything, I like the undercurrent of tenderness that was there. The fact that Oliver wouldnt look at her um, chest and the fact that he never asked her to remove anything and the fact that he kissed her hair and left her his clothes. How adorable. :D

And one more thing which left me buzzing with excitement. The fact that if Miley hadn't called, there just might have been some more tension which could have gone further. I swear, I feel like I am all hopped up and they didnt even kiss. Awesome job on the tension. This was excellent! :)

Dear amandajbruce,

You are the only Loliver author I bother to keep tabs on. I get on every single day JUST to check if you've written a new story, because they're the most realistic and my absolute favorites. Never doubt yourself, because they all turn out perfectly, and you need need NEED to write the beach party.

Even when you're done with everything in this, you need to keep writing for them because I feel like you do them the most justice and obviously your other reviewers agree.

I'm going to start writing Loliver stories at some point, because they're my new obsession, but I NEVER post my stories and you have inspired me to. Thank you for sharing your ideas with us, and please keep writing to keep us readers all sane. 3

First off let me just say, OH MY GOODNESS! Sorry i've been holding that in for like the whole story! This was crazy good. You pulled it off so well! :) I loved how clever it was. Expecially Miley calling near the end. Priceless! This was a job well done, that's for sure! There were literally parts that gave me goosebumbps.

damn you Miley! What rotten timing you have! Hope Lilly and Oliver will continue the game during the time Miley's gone. ;)

this is great

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I hope you start another story continuing this one xD

great plot and I read the one b4 when she couldn't sleep and the played solitaire :P supper cute 3 keep writting you've got talent!

It was an AWESOME thing that u wrote the story. :) I would have kept wondering if u didnt. Was very good. Lilly and Oliver so belong together it was never a question. I knew eventually miley would be a interuption :)...I liked it...Im glad u listen 2 ur reviewer :) Cant wait till u come up with more!

This is absolutely the best series of Loliver that I have ever read. I know technically it's a series of vignettes/one-shots, but it still follows a timeline and I think you are simply superb! I hate the fact that they are on Disney and, since they are the secondary couple, get the short end of the stick in plot a lot of the time, so I'm really excited that you started writing these. It's a great insight into their relationship-aside from Miley-and I like that there was more buildup in your stories instead of what the show gave us. Personally I don't think it came out of the blue on the show like a lot of people have said. I think that Oliver and Lily were already like a married, bickering couple WAY before the show ever put them together. There's a tension there between them that isn't there with him and Miley and I think the show secretly meant to put them together all along. I just think the people at Disney thought it would be funny to have Miley/Hannah be away for a month and have US the viewers find out at the same time she did about their relationship. I think the bigwigs were going for laughs, as usual, because Oliver and Lilly are the sidekicks and meant to be funny-or comic relief a majority of the time. However, I was annoyed that we didn't get their ACTUAL getting together shown. You know? So I guess what I'm trying to say is that I find your version of events very much believable and I'll just pretend that all the stuff you wrote was a great build up to when they finally got together at the beach party. I figured from what they showed us in WIDLAY that it was either all this secret build up and longing between them BEFORE the infamous beach party OR they realized their feelings for each other at the party and kind of freaked out afterwards about it. After all, they are best friends so it might be a little freaky realizing you're secretly crushing on each other, right? But I prefer your version, like I said, because I believe there were little hints and instances between them BEFORE the party and it just all culminated there that night. :D

OMG, I'm so sorry I was rambling. I don't have an account here so I cannot sign in, but I still wanted to give you props for writing such great fics. You're awesome! I hope you continue to write more in the future about our Loliver. And don't ever apologize for the fics being long. The longer, the better I always say. :D

~Rashida

...Wow.

That was INTENSE!

The part with the bikin strap my heart was literally beating FAST!

Then Miley called and then I was all phew!

Aww he kissed her...well not technically but it was still a kiss.

Great job! :D

You're awesome :)