Reviews for Onikage
JMA23 chapter 10 . 2/15
His name is senju hashirama
biginferno chapter 61 . 2/28/2019
even though this had several spelling errors I enjoyed it and It has a lot of potential in my opinion to be a great story its to bad it was left unfinished I would have enjoyed reading the completed story and seeing Tayuya, Guren and Karin make their way to Naruto's village and possibly see Tayuya join the harem maybe Samui as well later on
AcidESP chapter 61 . 10/18/2018
I love the story, continue, greetings, see you!
Monarch Mao chapter 4 . 5/15/2018
what the fuck?
Monarch Mao chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
the fuck?
thunderofdeath97 chapter 61 . 5/8/2018
grammar
detheater11 chapter 61 . 2/26/2018
god damn so good need more
Anon chapter 61 . 1/24/2018
As much as I hate criticizing people for their writing, I feel obliged to leave this here.
You really should take some sort of writing class and/or get someone to look over your work. Your work is full of errors -both grammatical and spelling- . Sorry if I’m being harsh but I felt I had to say something.
Borello chapter 61 . 1/8/2018
damnit. why you stop the story? the story gets interesting.
cyiusblack chapter 61 . 10/18/2017
update soon
Guest chapter 46 . 7/20/2017
well i was happy the story since the beginning but now am not so sure i can continue reading especially with the previous chapter and this one . well for one i see no reason you should alter the agreement of marriage choice between naruto and hanabi and whats with the silly reason of age gap when it has to do with love dont tell me you already forgot about the significant age gap between anko and the
ex mizugake together with other older secondly i thought you said this wont have harem,well so far all i have seen his you compiling all the women he ever encountered into harem for christ sake he is supposed to a maximum of atleast 4 wives so sorry to burst your bubble man but i think this story is already off track and frankly i dont i can continue reading with all of this errors, so sorry but i do certainly hoped your story would be more enjoyable so goodbye!
Oblivion196 chapter 61 . 1/17/2017
This was great. Is this story done?
RebelliousPrince chapter 61 . 1/12/2017
Good story :) too bad it's over
ivanganev1992 chapter 61 . 9/25/2016
ch 61

The new village still undeveloped but pretty powerful . The history class in my opinion could help but phisical training must be the main part . For strong beginers and so on . And filling the shinobi library , sharing the knolige and so on . And someone experienced to help the ranking . Still that village is ready to go . But Still my concern is Madara . But that village has very hight chance even in this state .
ivanganev1992 chapter 51 . 9/25/2016
ch 51

Maybe Kuubi could cure Hayate from his and even upgrade him with whatever he wants after preparations and enought time .
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