LOVE IT! TY!

This was your first lemon? Well let me just say it was hot, hot, hot! I've heard that it can be embarrassing to write lemons, I would imagine the kinkier and more hardcore scenes can be more difficult. If that is true I think you did a good job! A nice one-shot with a nice lemon, just what we all need! Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us, and good for you persevering through and finishing!

Woa..your first smut? ? Hellll! It wss great...
Though you seemed to have repeated some phrases a lot

This story is fantastic! Thank you so much for sharing it.

This was the first lemon you've ever written? Then congratulations. It was very good.

YUM that was HOT!

hey i really like it the one-shot. The end make me laught a lot, poor sasuke, but hey! he have the best sex in his life hahahahaha i really love a some, and dominant Naruto. He look so sexy like that.

Any way...ummmm i want to know if i can do the traslation to spanish. If you let me, please send me a PM

Thanks!

that was one amazing lemon ;)

Damn! This was hotter than hell! I loved it. *I wonder if its normal for a lesbian to love a story like this so much?* Ha like I care! This story was great I will definitely be back to read this again.

This was defff. a GREAT lemon it's one of the best I've ever read and I've read A LOT lol. :) I loved the story and everything about it! :)

ok thatt was so good hmmm naughty!

so thats why sasuke is always messin with naruto...

Haha poor sasuke! /:3 but he liked it. This was an awesome story and f*** suiguestu (or how ever you spell his name -.-)

Ahahaha... Seriously it was hawt! Simply simply hawt! XD hehehehehehhehehehe

I love it. Great job.