This is so lovely. Nice Story. Well written. We read only Castle.

If I was Castle I would of told Avery to "kiss my ass" and to mind her own business. In my opinion I think she kind of crossed the line in telling Beckett she thought Castle is a player.

How do you end the story after introducing a stalker?

Didn't really like this chapter, it seemed like you were trying to interject drama into the story just for dramas sake. Didn't really feel like it fit with the rest of the story.

I was hoping you would have Castle stay pissed at Kate a little longer but instead you have him acting like a weak willed little sap falling all over himself to please Beckett even though she treated him like shit .

Kate the runner

Kate's not a very good person in this story.

That's one trait that always irratated me about Castle and that was that fact that he's a complete pussy with the women in his life, even when their the ones in the wrong.

Angst?

This was a great story! A sequel would be wonderful. Please?

Oh No! Kill Meredith and dump her in the Hudson.

Oh my God I'm sick to my stomach! I can actually feel Kate's pain.

Great ending! I like it :)

Yeah, uh, that was me that said I was sick to my stomach. Posted it before I logged in. You get the idea though, of how good your story is.

Like the story!