| Reviews for Mia Bella Principessa |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 9/12/2018 This story needs a lot of work especially for plot development. Two people do not suddenly fall in love while knowing hardly anything about each other. And Bella, who just met him, is suddenly agreeing to leave everything behind, including solving her father's murder? This is really unrealistic and degrading toward love and towards people's individual choices. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/12/2018 I think you would benefit from having a beta or proofreading more thoroughly. Also it would have been nice for them to actually have developed at least some sort of relationship for the week before the ball instead of just a day. |
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/8/2018 Thank you for sharing |
 lilmstran chapter 18 . 9/5/2018 loved it |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/31/2018 Seriously? They talked for 5 hours and see now engaged and saying I love you? Who does this? This is absurd and just ridiculous. And really I think Alice should be in a mental institution every single story because she is just a loon. Also most royals rarely use last names and would never be addressed as king Carlisle Cullen or queen Esme Cullen it would simply be the King and Queen of England. Do some research before you write a story and who was your beta? They aren't very well read if they thought this story for lack of a better word was good enough to post. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2018 Horrible writing. Story jumps all over the place. Bella seems like a complete moron in this story. Edward as crown prince is a bumbling idiot. |
| alainaroullier chapter 4 . 9/1/2018 Sad Charlie story. |
| alainaroullier chapter 3 . 9/1/2018 Whirlwind! |
| alainaroullier chapter 2 . 9/1/2018 Love at first sight, indeed. |
| alainaroullier chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 I love a fairytale! |
| crimsontide4400 chapter 14 . 9/1/2018 Did you do any research because as heir apparent to the throne Edward would not be getting married in the garden. It would be at Westminster Abbey and there would definitely be other royals at the wedding. It would be a state wedding. |
| snoopylover60 chapter 18 . 8/31/2018 Thank you for finishing this story. I loved it :D I am so sorry for they hard times your family face. When it rains it pours, and your poor family was caught in the middle of it. Glad the sun has finally started to shine for all of you. God Bless. |
| snoopylover60 chapter 16 . 8/30/2018 Thank you for updating this! I was so shocked and excited that you did :D |
| Aliegator2014 chapter 15 . 11/3/2015 This is such a good story please update soon |
| snoopylover60 chapter 15 . 6/9/2015 I just found this story, and am so upset that you haven't updated in so long.. You should write for you, not the amount of reviews you get. Hope you update sometime! |
