loved how they kept there banter up thru there relationship it made there relationship just like Edward had wondered were they best friends that kissed and did stuff together

3rd reading. Still loving it.

Finally!

Virgin Edward?! I'm gonna sooo enjoy Jasper teaching him a few things. Lol

The cutest story EVER. God I wish there was more to read! :) keep writing!

Is Tanya a guy?
Loving both of these adorable guys!

I loved it ... love these boys.

This story is sweet and funny. I love edward and jasper (and their families). They were so awkward and adorabke . Well written and I got quite a few laughs out of it.

So funny. So sweet and so damned sexy. It ended too soon.

I loved this story so much! So sad it's over!

Wow just wow, where do I begin? This was one of the best, most endearing, well-written, sexy and adorable fanfiction stories that I have ever read! Your writing style is truly amazing and you portrayed both charachters impeccably. The relationship development was absolutely brilliant and do Not even get me started on your amazing grammar and spelling.I literally counted exactly five errors throught the entire story. You don't even know how rare that is! I'm actually overwhelmed by how amazing this was. Thank you so much for writing this. I'm excited to tell you that you will be receiving my first ever 10/10 rating! Congratulations and please continue making a better place!

Oh my lord! Usually I choose to stay as professional as possible and only comment when I have fully completed a fanfiction, but I cannot even deal with "The only dick I want to suck is Jasper's" I actually rolled out of my bed and onto the floor from laughing so hard! ;)

i completly love this story! they are so freaking cute together! an amazing story and a fabulous journey! love, tears and laugh! so much laugh. i love the spanish class and is exactly the same happen in latinoamerica... (except me) hahaha xD me encanto tu historia! soy baño? jajajaja muy buena esa! besos!

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oh my goodness! what an awesomely amazing story! the Edward and Jasper you created were perfect, like down to the Tee! Edward was really very sweet and gentle, I loved him. I loved watching him find his way to something so right for him, even when it was new and confusing! And Jasper was rough and soft all wrapped up in one! The way you broke down his defenses was beautiful. Especially having him always missing Edward way more- it wasn't what you expected but were SO happy to see!

You are a really excellent writer and I really feel like I learned a lot through your literature. wonderful story, really.