Reviews for Never Did Run Smooth
CloudCarnivore chapter 1 . 12/24/2018
XD OMG THIS IS ONE OF THE FUNNIEST STORIES EVER
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2017
XD
Tropicalnight chapter 1 . 6/14/2017
OH GOD THIS IS THE MOST EMBARRASSING FANFIC EVER
Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 9/10/2016
There's a strange wheezing sound coming from my throat and my face hurts. I can count on one hand the number of times this has happened, and it remains just as vaguely alarming each time.
abbyishere chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
Loved it! I just finished reading PH, and I really needed something cute like this *cries*
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2016
Elliot is so tsundere it hurts :'D
alqui chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
Oh my Elliot! After all that, he was the one getting kissed, huh? Very entertaining fic.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
This was adorable, I loved it, especially since they somehow remained in character throughout.
3 3 chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
absolutely brilliant! this was a wonderful end to a gray day. thank you so much for it 3 3
memoire chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
Elliot my baby, you're too precious for this world, too pure. I love this and well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
That's beautiful. Elliot's the real oblivious one, eh? This made my day
atalanta chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
Cute...too too too cute!*faints*
I Can Kill You With My Brain chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
I laughed a lot more than a little. This was wonderful. :-)
Carson chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
That was great! Dialogue was confusing but the story itself was hilarious.
Raven chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
Lol
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