FINAlly they're getting married :)

yummy that was yummy kiss yummy yummy yummy goki was hungry and bulma fed him with a kiss now goki is full

im loving this fanfic

Why not continue after chapter 24 now that they married another child thats a girl this time mention buu and continue from there this couple deserves alot more stories

Your sick you need help

You know what that is? Growth.

Son? Son is not actually his first name. They only reason for why Goten is male is because they weren't sure what a female Super Saiyan would look like.

Kill vegeta kill vegeta kill Vegeta kill vegeta kill Vegeta kill Vegeta

I hate stories like this. Not only did you simply brush off Bulma's rape like it's no big deal, but then you just let Vegeta live. This is not original in the slightest. This has been done by other authors and is rather pathetic in how desperately you're clinging to cannon. Why not mix it up and be original?

I'll be straight with you. I understand this is fanfiction. I get that apparently Trunks was just "destined" to be born. Still, authors like you who think rape is a fun little plot device to use disgust me. Rape shouldn't be taken lightly and you sure as hell are. Why not just have Vegeta get with Chichi or whatever? The future is already changed, and now Trunks is a product of rape. This is fanfiction, not some bs drama site. Why did you think that was okay? Because it's fictional? Believe me when i say, fictional or not, it's still offensive.

Can no one just write a story that involves them getting together after the piccolo fight? I mean, idk if it's because they like Chi Chi, but it's kinda more fucked up to make it where she loses Goku that way, just saying.

I've reread this story several times as of April 2019. I love reading it everytime. I doubt you'd see this, but I'd pay you to continue this story

Wtf

Good Story man

I don't understand why you rush the romantic parts. They're sweet, but you can feel the rush.