Well finally! I've been looking for a Seychelles/England story for ages. This was very cute, by the way.

I was completely blown away by this story!

Although the terminology for the fencing wasn't completely accurate, you got the feeling of a practice bout across very well. It was a nice thing to read.

I know a few things about fencing, so if you ever need help with terminology or anything, send me a message!

Have fun writing, and I'm really looking forward to this story!

~Lady Scribetracker~