Great story :D I can see that happening. I hope you plan to write a sequel because you ended on a kinda cliffie and I'm dying to know what happens next :D I can see jack helping Ian to cover up his bruises, could be interesting... :D anyways, great job :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

awwwwwwwwwwwwww

D'awww. I never expected that ending scene!

Is that really what Jack wanted? Because I thought of other things...

Anyways, nice story.

Ah! Oh, I just love that... the ending, I did not expect. Brilliant. Great descriptions, characterisation, plot, etc. Great work! :)

*sighs happily* Loved the ending!

so sweet - loved it!

This was awsome! please please please please please do a sequel...please!

aw I love it! :) You don't see it as much, but I love Jack/Ian. so sweet! And it was a really cool look on Ian's perspective. It's like James/lily - you never get to see it since they...well, died.

love it, tho!

~Bub'les

Great story. If you like Twilight, check out my story Burberry as its an Alex Rider crossover.

oh...

(i've got lovey-dovey eyes right here...don*t know if that makes any sense, to me it does)

anyway, i think it's sweet!

and i can't help but snicker when i envision their respective faces during the conversation

*g*

ciao

*meltedpuddleofgo*

That was my response.

Lovelovelove the ending - "You have to let ME kiss you".

Aah!

Aww sweet! Love this pairing!

Gwin

aww how sweet!