That’s hilarious that they thought he was a villain, and confirmed it in their eyes when his control slipped. I think it will be good, learning all the tricks of villains for whatever use he thinks

It's been 10 years and this story is still amazing I love coming back to it and re read it again and have it hold up if only you could do a sequel

Erosion of morality are ruin every story I have ever read with them I just won’t waste my time here

Holy shit this was chaotic-
g

What an amazing read. Truly this is one of the more unique crossover ideas I've read and I love how it was used to develop the characters. Everyone felt perfectly like themselves too with very little leaps in logic. The... for lack of a better word, poetry between the two worlds meshed very seamlessly and everyones involvement and chaotic climax were fantastic and had me smiling like and idiot the whole time.

I also like how almost every single plot thread was tied up at the end and flowed naturally to a conclusion. Very little wasted space, that said, I do look forward to what a rewrite could add and fix. Most of what I had problems with are very little nitpicks about things feeling contrived or not enough time dedicated to certain character actions to explain their motives better. All in all, wonderful story!

Also as a side note, I cant help but see Slade waking up from a nap for the first time in a week to find half of the city on fire and watching the back footage of the mini war and just being dumbfounded, and it just makes me laugh.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I can't say I understand what you mean about plot-holes, so I'm guess you reworked several things before I started reading. I'm very much interested in what will happen next, but just need to confirm. Are you making the sequel, or rewriting this story?

Would danny be considered anti-hero?

Danny x Raven x Jinx

Pls.

Lmao.

Damn now I want to write that.

VLAD

THOMAS

MARTHA

OOOOOOOH BOI

Oh no Jinx...

DANNY YOU BEST SAVE THEM

Poor Danny.

Also Danny Phantom. Danny Fenton.

Boy I wonder how nobody has figured it out lol.

Great story. Hopefully it will get finished completely

welp
So this isn't done?
Hope not
Thank you for the story!

Omg I really need to rewatch Danny Phantom and Teen Titans because this story reminds me of how much I loved watching them as a kid. I absolutely loved this story! I’m sad to see that you technically ended it so abruptly, though I hope that the promised rewrite is going well. I think you said you were a high school senior in one of your author notes, which earns you my deep respect.

Anyway, onto the story itself. I must commend your masterful use of humor, sarcasm, angst, and realism; you were able to utilize them to captivate the audience. Danny is arguably OOC, but in a good way, because you showed his (realistic) character growth that resulted from necessity and effort. Jinx’s relationship with Danny is a bit creepy and overly possessive, but I’m sure you were planning on explaining her tragic backstory to get the audience to understand her mindset. Jazz... is misguided but powerful? Idk how to explain her role, other than her having good intentions for Danny and partnering up with the wrong people. I’m still wondering when the Fenton parents are going to find out Danny’s secret, or whether the Justice League or the government will find out. Danny is incredibly paranoid, but I guess there were some upsides to his paranoia. I doubt he’ll be willing to share more personal information until Brother Blood (that SOB) is captured/killed. Though the very end of this chapter hinted that Phantom is going to face more supernatural challenges, this time from two ghosts plotting to mass genocide humanity using a deadly plague.

There’s so much more I should be saying about this story, but I’m a bit out of practice from writing lengthy reviews. I really enjoyed reading this, and I hope it motivates you to continue writing this story! Thank you.

Well damn. I was all for this up until now. I mean, I absolutely hate costume changes (especially trench coats), but it's easily ignored here. But now, now with the storm powers. It's just too much. Like you're unironically making him a Mary Sue. I legitimately made a groan of disappointment when I read he was getting new powers. Don't get me wrong, this story's well written and I'm sure it's not so bad. But man. Costume changes, personality varients, and new powers hurt my very soul.