Hi, I really loved all of the chapters, I'd be glad and thankful if you continue! I like the idea that you made Tsubasa and Youichi as Mikan's brothers! So please, Go on.

P.S Good work! I love all of your stories!

Why does it say its completed? Can you please update?

this is a VERY awesome story and i would like to finish this. Please? thank you! :D

I really liked this story

PLEASE DONT ABANDON THIS STORY!

ITS REALLY GOOD!

Please please continue

I would want to know what happens next

wat?

Has someone adopted this story? If it was can you tell me who. Please don't abandon this story. This is too good to be abandoned. DON'T DO IT! Hopefully you'll update

I really really like this story. Hope you update soon :)

I thought Reo had red hair :s

OH MY GOSH.

AWESOME STORY.

PLEASE, KEEP WRITING! DEDICATED READERS OUT THERE ARE WAITING!

I just love how the story is progressing like this, you can never tell whats going to happen next! really cute, exciting, funny, you name it.

i dont normally like stories when the characters aren't who they normally are in terms of status/jobs/age but this one story... made me change my mind on that :D

SO PLEASE! KEEP WRITING! oh, i review also on behalf of a few of my other friends who have been reading this as well. WE ARE ALL WAITING!

we love YOU and you WRITING!

gambatte!

UPDATE! UPDATE NOW! PLEASE!

m bueno no se si te intere se mi comentario pero a mi me gusto mucho como se fue desarrollando la historia ajaja me gustaria saber q va pasar en el siguinete capitulo jajajaj

Love the plot and how Natsume and Mikan are always arguing :] There were some grammatical errors but the humor totally made up for it. Hope you update soon.

~Shiro-chan

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE~~! Wow, this story is great, I'M EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Uh oh. No bueno for Natsume!

~Miko