I loved this so much! It made me so happy and made Fiyero seem more human than the perfection he is usually portrayed as. Job well done!

-Fangirl17

Loved it! :)

Apparently exotic green people had a very short fuse, very hot-headed, they are.

~Yes, we are!

She snarled.

He offered a rose.

She was speechless.

He felt honoured to hand her a rose.

She took the rose.

He wanted to squeal.

She hurried to a class.

He never managed to find her ever since.

~SNARLS? WHO IN THEIR OZ-FORSAKEN MIND SNARLS? GRANTED this IS Elphaba, but still...

He has already asked her if she wanted to go out to dinner with him today and he found that she was sporting a really bad mood, that is, judging by the remains of his burnt leather bag… She refused to tell him what happened to make her this upset and he was slightly afraid to push her.

~DON'T PISS her OFF!

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nice story!

i rly liked it!

u should consider writing a multi-chapter one!

but now im rly curious about why elphaba was so miserable..to the point of loosing control over her powers and accidentally burning fiyero's leather bag..in the scene where they were at the patio..but she wouldnt tell him why she was upset and he was afraid pressure her into telling him..but i wish he had so i wouldn't be curious..haha..oh well..

Cute story. Very interesting. I really liked all the description that you used. It wasn't overdone it just made it sound more interesting creating a very vivid picture.

Great job.