omg I love it , and perfect

I loved this. Great job xD

what happened to her hair? oh and good job

Great story! Thanks for sharing.

aw I love it!

aw

yeah

poor snake eyes... confidence issues?

who would a though... lol

It's good to see some people use the Snake-eyes and Scarlett love story from the comic book. Unlike some people who use the cartoon storyline and then just make up there own crap about how Snake and Scarlett get together. What a buch dumb motherfuckers!

Aw! So many people think Scarlet should be paired with Duke...This was beautiful, loved every word of it! _

aw, aw, and aw. my favorite two joes. (stormshadow and firefly are my favorite cobras) this was really good though :)

Very sweet but "oh too simple". If it were that simple, it wouldn't be intriguing.

But I must say, you write VERY eloquently and with great skill. Well done!

My thoughts:

Flint and Jaye are dull in the relationship department because they had nothing standing in their way- they naturally hooked up, got married, and no doubt there's a Flint Jr. in the works (if it isn't already in the oven).

The greatest bond between Snakes and Red has always been the devotion and the tension. Let it continue to be be so, says I.

If it had been so easy, we wouldn't love them so much.

I want Scarlett and Snake Eyes back together. It sucks that they were split up. I think eventually they will get back together, they'll just take their sweet time doing it. your story is a good antidote for us frustrated fans.

HI! That was a sweet story-It took me a minute to get it though considering I don't follow the comic.

SWEET! Just too SWEET!

If only the comic would mirror your story...Ahh, the stuff of dreams.