I really liked this ending to your other story. Which was amazing by the way!

I couldn't really enjoy this, in part because it was really contrived that Moka didn't tell Tsukune what she had planned, creating superfluous drama.

Mostly it's because I just felt so bad for Mizore, her sitting in the cinema was just heartbreaking.

you'll never be alone again Moka," promised - you'll never be alone again Moka," he promised

both endings are great

Yeah dam that was too much for what the ice girl did

Me liked this ending.

I prefer this ending only because it was a happy one instead of the other tragic end. I liked that you had mizore go a little crazy with grief at the end on the rooftop as i kept thinking she was handling it too calmly. I also liked the reason moka gave for why she sent tsukune away though i am confused why she got rid of the contract if she planned on being with him in the human world anyway. I realise why you went with the other ending since as you said actions have consequences, i'm just a sucker for a happy ending

Lol

Your other ending was good in a very tragic way and fit the story line as well, but I have to admit I like this one better out of a personal penchant for happily ever afters.

Such a heart-warming ending. I would love to see an anime or graphic novel based off of this fan fiction.

Loved this ending

Tragedies are excellent, but I definitely preferred this ending! Fantastic writing, keep it up!

I've read both this and the other ending, while liking both and the writing style, i will admit i prefer this one, call me a sucker but i always prefer happier endings. I can't wait to read the other stories you have posted and hope to be able to write something as well put together as your stories.
Red

Even though this was a chipperier ending, I felt the other one had more meaning.

But overall, great ending.

- BANG

Though I can see how some might disagree, this ending feels a bit less natural than the other, if only because the entire Mizore incident seems to fizzle out after her attack.

Were the story to continue from this ending though (unlikely though that may be), I could easily see Mizore popping back up somewhere in the future, possibly as a member of Fairy Tale, following the events in her hometown, almost certainly with a grudge against them both.

Ah, regardless, my thanks again for these wondrous stories,
-Mhyrloc