Reviews for Time's Spinning Gears
JingleCat chapter 6 . 5/20
I think I felt physical pain when I saw this hadn't updated in 10 years- I really really loved it though! iobneakvldjuvbndsap
Guest chapter 6 . 11/9/2019
Lmao here I am waiting almost a decade later
diecupcakes chapter 6 . 3/28/2019
Hello. I'm sorry if this may come off as rude, but I have to be blunt. It's been 9 YEARS! Are you alive? (I'm sirius!) If not, my condolences go to your friends and family. But, anyway, PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE! I'm begging you!
Again, sorry, but I happen to be addicted to Naruto time travel fanfictions, mostly good written ones back to his genin days. Like yours! Great ideas, by the way. If you know of any good Naruto time travel fanfics, please tell me. Or at least put them in your favorites, or something. I'd greatly appreciate it.
Anyhow, hopefully you're alive, 'cause it'll be extremely embarrassing after this long message to find out you're not.
Ja ne! (My username's diecupcakes, if you haven't noticed)
Ghost of Los Angeles chapter 6 . 11/29/2018
Thou shalt not abandoned stories
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 10/4/2018
that was good keep the chapters coming
Tantei-Otaku-kun chapter 3 . 8/23/2018
I really love Mianto’s sense of humor! But most of all this is a funniest part, “Bunshin. Shit.

Three half-dead clones stood, woozily swaying from side to side. One lay on the dirt, frothing at the mouth. Needless to say, they were absolutely useless. His chakra control was shit.”
Hilarious!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2018
Please post another chapter, this story is one of the few amazingly thought out stories with excellent grammar, and it would be amazing to have a new chapter soon, dattebayo!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/8/2018
Will you continue to update this story? It is nice btw
moodysavage chapter 6 . 6/15/2018
nothing else?
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 3/4/2018
that was good keep the chapters coming
UPDATE chapter 6 . 1/24/2018
PLEASE UPDATE!
Snowdrops and Rainclouds chapter 6 . 11/9/2017
Ah, this is such an interesting story! The newly forming dynamics between everyone, the slow realization most of the characters are having- that something is different, something is wrong- and how that''ll continue to grow until the truth is found out. Thank you for writing this!
tape chapter 6 . 7/16/2017
plz post again
RenesmeVivio chapter 6 . 3/5/2017
This ... This ... Snif ... Fantastic... I can't comment any further cause it's perfect (Meh LIES). It's hitting right to the feels, to the core, heck even reached my bones (See now I can't stop. It's all your fault author~san T~T).

Oh Minato no one knows that you are the Yondame so don't worry (for now). All I can see that they think (Kakashi & later Hokage of course) that you got an experience or a trauma maybe and know the truth of your existence (who are you really, and whom your parents).

Otherwise, I can't contained my excitement for your fic dear author so don't be harsh to yourself. Your fic is magnificent so like yourself and your creative brain okay Teehee

This is so beautiful my dear author so please DO NOT NEGLEGT YOUR GOD DAMN WONDER FIC EVER YOU HEAR ME I BEG YOU PLEASE OR I'LL DIE FROM CRYING AS HELL I DON'T WHEN. Phew.. there... I finished from my emotional mode so update please new chapters not just one.

Cheers
~RenesmeVivio Out~
Reasonable man chapter 6 . 12/27/2016
I have just stumbled to your fic accidentally. Never thought that there will be fic about reincarnated Fourth Hokage, not just simple, as in the body of his own son. I think there is no fic that has that kind of plot, and it is really interesting to read future chapters.

However, you havent benn updating your fic for SIX years and you havent been updating your profile for THREE YEARS. It would be so bad that this fic is abandoned. I will follow your story hoping that someday your will start to continuing your fic.

P.S. Please make your chapters a bit longer.

Good luck.
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