Ah! *runs in circles* I loved it! It was so sweet yet angsty! And I never saw that coming! Sasuke, don't take it too far next time you bastard! *Shakes head*

Alright, for the grammer/spelling, it was perfect, no mistakes!

As for the plot it was so freaking cool! I would have never thought of that! I would have said Gaara raped him or something (even though I love my Gaara-Kun) Please, please, please write more angst! You're really good at it!