Reviews for Ten Lives to the Fall
Thunder-Death chapter 5 . 8/6/2019
Amazing. I'm looking forward the following chapters !
Wika0304 chapter 5 . 1/21/2018
please update
hitokori midnight chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
it's great we need more Kora
ShiroyaMakuro chapter 4 . 10/2/2016
its good! please update~
rhizz17 chapter 5 . 9/16/2015
update please
An chapter 5 . 3/27/2015
Haha omg, Xanxus teaching students by making them teach themselves. Awesome.
Looks like tsuna is having trouble staying with his cover and continuing the mission.
I laugh every time I here/read about the hit on voldemort. Lol. Its just that the idea of the Mafia placing a hit on the dark lord is immensely amusing to think about. I hope u continue this! Btw, why did u leave the author's note chapter up? I don't understand why an author doesn't remove it even after they post a new chapter.
Ann chapter 2 . 3/27/2015
Ooh, did contact between tsuna and the hat actually cause an explosion (I'm sure xanxus would approve, or not) or was that figurative for the hat being mentally 'blown away'? This is such an interesting story. Can't wait to read more! I wonder where tsuna will be placed. Gokudera is not going to be happy if they are separated. :D
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
Heehee. Hilarious
booklover1209 chapter 5 . 7/15/2014
Selective silencing! XD I actually really like this story. Too bad that you left it though. :( I'll follow and favorite anyway just in case.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/13/2014
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AnimeFreak71777 chapter 5 . 5/4/2014
Update please!
armysugakookie chapter 5 . 5/1/2014
Nicely done. It was interesting to see Xanxus being a teacher...I wished Mukuro would show up soon. About when would he show up?
armysugakookie chapter 4 . 5/1/2014
You shouldn't care what those reviewers said. THis is YOUR story, you can do whatever you want to it. You can make Tsuna a freaking pervert who likes to do strip tease shows for all I would care. You can do ANYTHING you want because this is your fanfic. You should ignore what they said because they HOLD NO CONTROL over YOUR story. Besides, your writing isn't bad. I have seen MANY who are MUCH WORSE than your's. Your's is amazing in my view...the story is awesome, plot is super awesome, the characterization is EVER MORE AWESOME!

I hope you can continue it when you feel motivated. I don't know how to make you feel motivated, but really, try to ignore these horrible reviewers. They are trolls, they hang around fanfiction all day to say bad stuffs about good stories to make the author feel hurt and make them discontinue the story. They mostly did it out of jealousy. If they see a story better than their's, then they would try everything they can to make the author discontinue it. If you really aren't going to update this fic, then you lose to them. Please don't let the trolls win, update this fic, I'm sure once you started writing, you'll forget about all the ugly trolls and became obsessed with writing this again.

All in all, I wish you a wonderful day,
Loner Kid.
armysugakookie chapter 3 . 5/1/2014
tsuna is a little ooc
LDK chapter 5 . 4/13/2014
Hey, this review is late I know, but I hope you read it! I think your writing is a lot better than you think, although it could be improved slightly. But every single author in the world can improve their writing. For you, I thought in some parts descriptions were very vague. Tsuna's interactions with the ninth for example were confusing for me. However, internal thoughts and actions, as well as scenes are well written. Maybe its just the character interactions that are a little confusing from my point of view. Other than that, this is a fabulous story with a captivating plot. I think Tsuna (in his HDWM), Hayato and Xanxus all act in character, and all crossover challenges (like language barrier, Xanxus not actually knowing magic that well) were adeptly addressed. So thanks for writing this! It was a really cool read!
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