I love this... This is so sad yet awesome,

Wow, this is a really cool idea~! I like it! :)

I have reviewed this before, but without signing in. It's pretty. Simple but it contains powerful strikes of words choices. That's why I'm in love with your writting style. Hope there is more of your work

Ah. Kerennya.

i thought i had reviewed this, but i guess not DX it's so beautiful! i can't really describe how i feel about it, but it's very lovely.

I really liked this - good job on characterization too, especially with Arthur and Alfred.

Truly beautiful.. :)

I couldn't say anything more. Good job..

Keep writing!

Simply beautiful . I love the last part :D

A simple peice but good and reflective

Oh I really liked the last part! Very powerful, and I liked all the references to differnet kinds of mythological creatures. It seems like you really did your research!

Very nicely done! :)

Powerful. A little short though. It was nicely written, but I like to see a little more description. Scenery, flashbacks, anything. It's like a research paper: the more facts you have to back yourself up, the more credible you sound. Overall, very well done.

TBR

I love the way you wrote the story! It's really awesome!