aw John is a bit harsh now isn't he...

Very authentic sounding scene. You can imagine this happening in their past. Nicely done.

There's nothing like a father's reassurances if things look bad.

One minor thing though, and no offence, please. Wasn't the “I promise.” from John as well?

I hope this wasn't typical John behaviour, you know! I mean no wonder then that Sam and him didn't get along! I mean to take Dean out of the hospital like that...wrong move John!

that 'I promise' gave me hope that maybe John will take care of Dean...

lovely one shot!

S.

Yikes! Poor, poor Dean... And Sam. And John. Sad. So sad.

I love Sam holding aside the gown to show his dad, like "LOOK at this, how can he be OK?" Didn't really mind him thinking how pale and sick Dean looked, either, oddly enough.

Those poor boys - never had it easy. Pretty awful for John too, having to take them away too soon.

Lovely caring Sam...I'd love to read more of this one.

Jane x

hey that's a terrible situation to be in. I live in England and I thnk goodness for the National Health Services! DBB x

i like this a lot- but maybe the last sentance would be better if it says "you promise?" otherwise, good job with the challenge! excllent! write on!

So good of Sam to worry for Dean. I get a bit mad about John, who probably did stuff like this. But at the same time I can understand it, because I"m sure they were on the run all the time and didn't have any insurance.

Poor poor Winchesters. 'A hole in his side' just so Sam! All worried and jumpy over a sick big brother. Thanks for the wish hun! You're awesome.

Aw. *pets the wee boys*

Terrific fic! Dean still out of it from surgery and Sam so worried about him. Very nice. :)

Very touching.

Thanks for this, hon! I'm betting this is killing John...

aww.

i could totaly picture this happening. nice jobb