I would love more of this fanfic!

Please! Update the story it is REALLY GOOD!

Make more chapters! It's a really good story!

Make more chapters i wanna read lemon

Xorcon...you're golden.

You ass how dare you make fun of cloud strife calling him a downer other a good story update soon

I wish u keep writing it it's going good

Writer...WHY YOU NO MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER?!

I like it it's well thought out.

Good story but an update would be nice

Come ooooooon... want more and its been weeks upon weeks since ive read the second chapter..._

I actually find this story good and amusing. I've read a few highschool fanfics myself and let me tell you, don't bother reading them. You on the other hand are doing well with a very good plot so far and very minimal grammar mistakes. Keep up the awesome work cus i can't wait till chapter 3.
Oh and not many people post stuff on LarxeneSora/LarxeneRoxas but im glad that you did because there some of my favorite pairings. That and I think Larxene is just damn sexy _.

wow this is awesome it be nice if it was continued it old i guess but awesome

U need to continue it. It's pretty discriptive and fun to read

This pairing is awesome, but not seen often enough. PLEASE CONTINUE!